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Editing: Introduction — or why everyone needs an editor
Poor American Pharoah. I mean, he had just become the first horse in 37 years to win the American Triple Crown — and all people were talking about was his misspelled name. "Pharoah" should have been "Pharaoh," but the name was submitted, and duly registered, with the incorrect spelling. "That poor horse's name is spelled incorrectly," lamented one person on Twitter, while another predicted the inevitable: "American Pharoah win ensures that Americans will never again spell pharaoh correctly."
Marsha Baumgartner, the Missouri nurse who submitted the colt's name in an online contest held by Zayat Stables in 2014, later said that she didn't remember how she spelled it. But she did check it: "I looked up the spelling before I entered," she said, although her source remains unnamed. That might have been the end of it if American Pharoah had been an ordinary horse. When his career took off, however, the misspelling molehill turned into a mountain.
As reported by the New York Times, owner Ahmed Zayat's son Justin initially stated that the mistake had been made by the Jockey Club. Prior to the 2015 Kentucky Derby, however, Jockey Club president and CEO James L. Gagliano released a statement that read in part: "Since the name met all of the criteria for naming and was available, it was granted exactly as it was spelled." Jockey Club registar Rick Bailey confirmed that there had been "no data entry on our end." In fact, once the Zayats had selected Baumgartner's name, they submitted it electronically to the Jockey Club as is (that is, without checking), and realized the error only when it was too late.
Now, of course, American Pharoah has become one of the most famous horses on the planet, and not just for winning the Triple Crown. His misspelled name will go down in history alongside grammatical gaffes such as Mitt Romney's smartphone app — you know, the one that promised "a better Amercia" back in 2012. And there seems to be an ongoing problem with the name of the nation. The latest typo: "Unites States," right at the top of the response submitted by Donald Trump's legal team to the charge of inciting an insurrection. At least they got "insurrection" right.
Surveying the damage in the wake of the Amercia incident, the Washington Post's Sandra Fish said it right at the beginning of her commentary: "Everyone needs an editor." An editor, a proofreader, someone to double-check — or maybe even triple-check — that troublesome word. Someone to say "yea" or "neigh," if you will.
At the end of the day, "Amercia" was probably a real typo, keyed in hastily in the heat of the moment (as was "Unites States"). "Pharoah," on the other hand, was an error that missed being corrected twice — first, before the name was entered in the contest, and second, before the name was submitted to the Jockey Club. Still, if anything, the publicity generated by this story has led to an increase in dictionary consultation; two days after the Belmont Stakes, "pharaoh" was the second-highest search term on Merriam-Webster.com. And we can all be grateful that this splendid colt was not named "Amercian Pharoah"!
My editing experience
I put this varied editing experience to work for my book publishing clients, whether working with managing or project editors or with authors themselves. Accuracy, attention to detail, and completion of projects on time are the hallmarks of my editorial work.
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